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It didn't end. It multiplied.

  • Writer: Luvv A Sanwal
    Luvv A Sanwal
  • Nov 15, 2025
  • 4 min read
A small flame on a paper wick surrounded by vibrant marigold and rose petals  for final death rituals. Story from Luvv It

Short Story Summary

A grieving family gathers under one roof as they struggle to make sense of a sudden, heartbreaking loss. Voices tremble, secrets surface, and emotions fracture the silence of their home. But unseen in the corner of every room stands the one person they’re all mourning, forced to witness every tear, every whispered theory, and every unspoken regret. This haunting short story explores the weight of hidden battles and the unbearable consequences of choices made in silence, pulling readers into an emotional revelation they never see coming.


The living room is crowded today.

Funny… it hasn’t been this crowded in years.


Maa is sitting on the sofa, holding photo frame so tightly, that i fear the glass might crack.


I stand right beside her. And It hurts to see her like this.


Chachi touches her arm. “Be strong, didi.”

Her voice always had a tremble, but today it feels like it’s breaking with every word.


“She’s not going to be fine,” I mutter.

No one hears it, obviously.


On the other side of the room, relatives are gathering like pigeons around gossip instead of grains.


“I told him a hundred times,” Mama says, shaking his head dramatically, “he was always too emotional. Never listened.”


A cousin sniffles loudly, then leans close to whisper to another, “Shame… and just when his life was finally settling. You think he fought with someone? Maybe with his dad?”


“Maybe,” the other says softly. “He did have a temper sometimes.”


I let out a shallow breath.


But then I see Papa.


God.


He’s sitting quietly in the corner, elbows on his knees, staring at the floor like the answers are written there. He hasn’t said a word.


His silence is the loudest sound in the room.


Every now and then he wipes his face, almost angrily, like he can't accept that these tears belong to him.


Maa suddenly breaks again, clutching photo frame tighter.


Another relative whispers to someone, “He used to keep everything inside. Never complained. Who knew he was fighting so much alone?”


I look around. Every face is breaking in its own way. Every voice sounds like it’s walking on glass. And I’m standing in corner of same room, watching them crumble.


A faint argument brews near the dining table.

“If he had spoken…” someone says under their breath.

“He was sensitive,” another replies softly. “He carried more than he showed.”


Their words pierce through me.

I want them to stop.

I want them to understand.

But I can’t. I’m trapped in a silence deeper than theirs.


Maa suddenly breaks, her sob escapes like a wound tearing open.

“Why did you leave us?” she cries, pressing the photo to her chest.


Papa squeezes his eyes shut.

He turns his face away.

His shoulders start shaking.


The sound of my mother’s pain travels through me like fire.


“I didn’t leave,” I whisper.

“I just wanted everything to stop… I thought… I thought...”


But the room doesn’t care.

My explanations fall dead in the air.


A relative enters late, speaking too loudly as he removes his shoes.

“It’s such a tragedy,” he says. “He was so young… but these things…”

His voice drops to a harsh whisper.

“They don’t happen without reason.”


Someone hushes him, but it’s too late.

Maa’s crying grows harsher.

My legs feel weak.


Ny niece climbs into Maa’s lap.

“Nani, don’t cry,” she says softly.

Maa nods, but she’s shaking too much to speak.

She tries to give the child a small smile.

She tries to smile. Tries.


People keep coming in.

Some crying.

Some performing drama.

Some pretending they cared more than they ever did.

Some pretending their shock is grief.


One aunty says, “He looked fine yesterday. Why do young people get so stressed? We had tougher lives.”


Maa cries out, “Why did he choose this? If he had told me once… just once…”


Choose this.

The words stab deeper than any blame in the room.


Because nobody knows.

Nobody knows the truth.


They see the ashes.

They don’t know who lit the fire.


I look at my hands.

I look at Maa.

I look at the garland on photo frame.


And I suddenly feel it again - that weight.

That shame.

That pressure behind my ribs.


The same feeling that dragged me to that final moment.


then one relative whispers too loudly, “They confirmed it… he took his own life."

Another gasped, "Suicide… it’s such a selfish act.”

“Selfish?” I cry out. “SELFISH? You think I wanted any of this?”


The moment freezes.

Time stops breathing.

Because that’s my curse.


To stand here.

To watch them break.

To feel every tear like it’s acid on my soul.

To listen to every assumption, every judgment.

To scream and never be heard.

To regret what I can never reverse.


You think death frees you.


It doesn’t.


Not when you take your own life.

Not when you leave your problems behind only to create a thousand more.

Not when you force the people who loved you the most to carry your pain for the rest of theirs.


The priest calls everyone for the final prayer.

Maa kisses my photo.

Papa gets up slowly, like moving hurts.

My niece holds the corner of the frame gently, like I’ll wake up if she’s careful enough.


And that’s when the truth hits me fully.

I didn’t just die.

I ran.


And now…

I am forced to stand here, invisible, immovable, unfree.

A soul trapped in the aftermath of my own escape.


Cursed to watch my family grieve…

Because I chose the easiest exit

from the hardest moment

of my life.


Bound to the pain I created.

Condemned to watch every tear, every question, every ache…

with no power to reach out.


Not the rope.

Not the pill.

Not the blade.

Not the leap.


What killed me was the belief that taking my life would end the suffering.


It didn’t.

It multiplied it.


“I’m here,” I whisper to them, voice breaking,

“I’m here… and I’m sorry.”


But they can’t hear.


That’s the punishment.

That’s the twist.

And that’s the truth I only learned after it was too late.

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Sushma Roy
Sushma Roy
Nov 15, 2025
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Its a hard hitting story and a great message to many who struggle with such thoughts..

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Dr. Jhumpa Sarkar
Dr. Jhumpa Sarkar
Nov 15, 2025
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Your story is the answer to the multiplying suicide rate in our country. Loved it so much ♥️. Keep writing 👍

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Luvv A Sanwal
Luvv A Sanwal
Nov 15, 2025
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Thanks a ton 🤩😇👍🏼

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Adil
Nov 15, 2025
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Unique, nicely written, optimistic and engaging ✨

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Luvv A Sanwal
Luvv A Sanwal
Nov 15, 2025
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Thank you so much 😇👍🏼

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Ekta
Nov 15, 2025
Rated 4 out of 5 stars.

A story that keeps multiplying the suspense and the thrill till the end without revealing the mystery.

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Luvv A Sanwal
Luvv A Sanwal
Nov 15, 2025
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Thanks a lot 😇

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Nirali Virani
Nov 15, 2025
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

I love how you poured every emotions in this story. I don't know how to express my emotions after reading this. Thank you Luvv for writing this.

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Luvv A Sanwal
Luvv A Sanwal
Nov 15, 2025
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Thank you Nirali

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