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Beyond - Rakshabadhan

  • Writer: Luvv A Sanwal
    Luvv A Sanwal
  • Aug 21, 2025
  • 3 min read

Updated: Sep 3, 2025

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Emotional short story 

Flash fiction captures the unspoken strength of an eldest daughter who becomes the protector of her siblings after their father’s death. Set against the backdrop of Raksha Bandhan, it redefines the meaning of Rakhi, showing that true heroes aren’t always brothers—sometimes, they are sisters who carry the world on their shoulders.

She stood at the balcony-steel railing rusted, laundry lines sagging, the scent of agarbatti mixing with frying pakoras from the next house.

Chin up. Spine straight. Tall. Guarded. Weathered like the walls of their one-room chawl flat.

Hair thrown up in a bun that had given up trying to look neat. Charcoal under her nails from fixing the fuse again.

A fresh bruise on her forearm from carrying a leaking gas cylinder two flights of stairs.

Tan lines from the sun. Eyes that had forgotten how to soften.

Stubbornness clung to her skin like second nature.


She wasn’t what the neighborhood called “feminine.”

Too loud. Too blunt.

Never wore bangles. Never wore fear.

"She’s arrogant all the time.”

She was the “tameez-less” one. The one with opinions.

“She’s ruining her sisters’ chances.”

“No father, no control.”

“What kind of girl lifts gas cylinders and rides bikes like that?”


But the cracked walls inside her home knew something they didn’t.

She was gravity. Holding everyone close.


The chawl was unusually quiet, as if it, too, waited for something sacred.

He tiptoed in. Barely nine. She didn’t hear him. The wind was louder than his breath. The street below buzzed with rakhis, sweets, and scooters. But he tugged at her oversized t-shirt, soft. She turned half startled, half knowing. Their eyes met. For once, she didn't mask the tired in her gaze.


He didn’t say a word.

She looked down at his hand. Then at him.

Tiny palms holding a thread something handmade, and a melted chocolate clenched like treasure.”


With trembling fingers, he tied the Rakhi, the cotton thread snagging on her rough skin.

And then… he spoke. A voice that hadn’t cracked yet, but a heart that had matured early.


“You fix leaking taps, broken bones, burnt brunches, shattered hearts.

You walk me to school and home, never mind your double shift.

When mummy cries, you sit beside her like Baba would’ve.

You scold Didi when she gives up on dreams.

You laugh the loudest when we forget to.

You protect us from every monster.

I want the world to know...

Tu meri hero hai, Didi.

Not ‘like’ a brother.

but even Better.”


And just like that - the dam broke.

She didn’t cry. She crumbled.

The kind of breakdown only an eldest daughter knows-quiet, buried, and years overdue.

The way shoulders finally fall after years of carrying the weight.


She pulled him close into her arms like she was holding Baba again.

Not the black-coffee drinker. Not the mechanic-sister. Not the one who “never had time for makeup.”


But a protector. A provider.

A woman who carried the weight of three lives after losing the man of the house, and never once let it show.


And in that moment, under a leaky tin roof… she wasn’t just the sister.


She was the story.

The reason the festival of Rakhi still breathes meaning.

A thread tied not on tradition but love.

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